Draft: Questions about the Music

The article is about white-power racist music and how stupid it is.
The music is pro-white power and anti-black. It reaches out to white Americans for racism.
The author does have an opinion.
His opinion is that this music shouldn't be produced be major labels because it is offensive.
He leaves questions about why the bands are producing anti-black music unanswered.
He begins the article by talking about the first black president-elect and how far America has gone to combat racism.
He ends the article by saying that no matter what the bands do, they will eventually lose support because their ideas (and music) suck.
Yes, he uses a pompous kind of humor.
The article is written for average music consumers and retailers.
The purpose of the article is to bring the attention of these bands to average people and call for their music to stop being sold.
I wouldn't have done anything differently; in my opinion the author nailed this issue.